I writhed this poem at poetry time

          Dragon poem 

                             Big         scary 

           Flying     running walking

              Dragon’s breathing fire

                         Dragon

my movie

me and some of my cousins and me made a movie

here is the trailer

                                                           please comment
 to get the full movie send a gmail to Daniguck@stfrancischch.school.nz or matthew.j.s@outlook.co.nz or daniel@ctrlit.co.nz or sebakell@stfancischch.school.nz or michaels@merrin.school.nz hope you enjoy  

at school at Writing time i righted this

Take 4 tales

Setting: candy land

Character: easter bunny

Conflict: finds one million dollars

Radom:an ipad

one day the easter bunny ate an ipad because the ipad fell into
his mouth. The ipad was playing candy land. He started shaking
then he disappeared. all The easter bunny could see was a blur
of rainbow stuff. 2 minutes later the easter bunny could see
where he was he was in candy land. He found himself in a big
container of candy at one side was a claw and on the other
side there was a controller was it the controller to control the
claw its worth a try said the easter bunny he hopped to it as fast
as he could when he got his hands on it he moved it so that he
was under it when he pressed the drop button it picked him up
along with some candy the easter bunny accidentally dropped the
controller snaping stick and got jammed by some candy causing it
to go towards the portal to escape. Nelly there the controller hit
the ground causing the drop button to atavat. The easter bunny
possed off the claw tawaed the portal as the claw opened
launched for the ground the easter bunny landed on the edge the
first chans the easter bunny he hopped into the portal first all he
could see a pink blur then he saw he was in a pool of million
dollars in his home the end  

free Writing

In my free time I Writing

One day seb and daniel saw a Village in minecraft we guess what the chest had in it. it had 9 iron 1 gold 
3 diamonds and a Potion. it was an amazing chest and we crafted so much stuff and we saw the
charged creeper. it exploded it took  away half of sebś and daneil’s heats but we killed the creeper it was
a charged creeper. It was an amazing battle it dropped 1000 gunpowder we made so much tnt then we
rooled the world!!! Well we did not really rooled the world but we did a Guinness World Record of tnt it
was cwit amazing and then… the hole minecraft shut down if we tried to get on minecraft but it waseent
letting us on we were so annoyed. The reason wiy we could not get on is because of a new apdate we
got on as fast as we can. First we make a campfire next a stonecutter and then we saw a husk 

By Seb  and Daniel

text types

In reading I have been learning text types  

this video helped me make this list

                                             

How to Write a Quality Comment!

•  Compliment the writer a specific way!
•  If you like there bolg tell them
• Be positive 
• Add new information 
•  Make a connection
• End with a question
• Proofread your comment

My first animation

this is my first animation (i,m no,t done)

   
these images were used in this slid show

Welcome Nau mai, haere mai ki tēnei taonga

Welcome

Welcome to my very own blog for learning. I look forward to sharing my learning with teachers, my school, my family and friends anywhere.