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Wednesday, August 26, 2020

writing


i writhed this story at school
Joy ran around the boat as heron rowed out to the middle of the lake then joy looked down at the fish
swimming happle past the boat then his attention turned to a dragon fly was zoomed past then and around
the boat joy chased after them then they flied of in the distance
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