(i am not done yet)
Compliment the writer a specific way! If you like there blog tell them Be positive Add new information Make a connection End with a question Proofread your comment
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Brown. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteYour poster is nice and clear and shares some really useful information. I am not sure why but I can not click on your links.
Remember to add full stops at the end of your sentences.
Do you enjoy blogging?
Mrs Bryce
i put the links on the side so they work.
ReplyDeleteyes i am liking blogging its fun